Dear Geoff in response to your reply on "riveting Story" and your response to "introduction" . I stated that I liked "Explain your presence" with a quick introduction followed by a riveting tale . You disagreed .
Re Note 11:
Riviting tale, eh? When was the last time you heard a "riveting tale" in a business meeting of any kind, anywhere?
Geoff I'm sorry but we must live on different planets I have been to a number of business meetings where " the story " is brief but riveting and important to the success of the meeting.
Some examples of great business people that used stories to capitvate audiences small or large.
"Don Hewitt producer, journalist, creator "60 Minutes" It was in 1968 that "60 minutes" debuted and established a faithful following of millions that still tune-in every Sunday."The formula is simple: It's four words, every kid in the world knows: tell me a story. It's that easy," he said of his philosophy for the show. Hey Geoffrey Hewitt also went on to say that this simple formula is the success behind the world's most popular book 'The Bible."
"Steve Jobs will be the star attraction when the Macworld Conference and Expo opens to the public Tuesday, but many Mac fans might be just as interested in hearing from one of the original Mac's creators. Andy Hertzfeld will be signing copies of his book, "Revolution in the Valley: The Insanely Great Story of How the Mac was Made" on the conference floor. Actually, the book's title is a bit misleading--rather than a story, its a collection of dozens of short stories that provide a unique behind-the-scenes look at the birth of the Mac"
Sony,Louis Vuitton, Microsoft, Donald Trump, Lululemon ,Ford Motors, Ferrari, etc ,etc, The VIP point is likely history of BRAND or STORY. ie Listening to Mr. Akio Morito telling why they choose the SONY name.
I also disagree with you on introduction , and so did several others , introduction is not all about me,me,me. First of all it's polite , & good manners and its good business . It's about very briefly what I did, why I did it, when, with who and where, to establish credibility ,lay down education and credntials so the audience knows you know what you are talking about.
Re Note 18:
Quote: telling people about yourself - Introduction - that lends credibility to why they should listen is critical. Who are you? Why are you telling me about this? Why are you the one to convince me? Why should I listen? If I don't start with something about me, how do I build a relationship?Wow. Hard to believe that you're making any sales at all with that strange belief set.